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 Volume 2, Issue 2 February 2005 
In This Issue
  • 3 Puntuation Mistakes to Avoid
  • Resources
  • Feedback Central
  • About Cassie Hart

  • Greetings,

    Well, apparently the groundhog saw his shadow this week, which means we're stuck with six more weeks of winter. I'm as ready for spring to arrive as anyone, but I've got to admit that there's one big advantage to the long, cold, gray days of winter.

    I tend to get more work done.

    There are no warm, sunny afternoons to lure me away from my desk. There's no need to set aside time in the morning to water the garden and weed the flowerbeds. And the racket from my neighbor's ailing lawnmower doesn't break my concentration.

    So, thanks to Punxsutawney Phil, I'll enjoy another few weeks of hot coffee in the morning (in the summer I switch to iced tea) and the quiet confines of my closed- up house.

    But believe me, I'll also welcome warm spring breezes and the sweet scent of lilacs drifting through open windows when the time comes. And I'll bet you will, too. Hang in there--we're getting closer!

    All the best,

    Cassie Hart

    www.cassiehartwriter.com

    3 Puntuation Mistakes to Avoid

    Do you find yourself puzzling over possessives and consulting your co-workers about commas? If so, rest assured that you're not alone. There are several types of punctuation errors that sometimes creep into our writing. Let's look at three common mistakes that-- with a little clarification--can easily be avoided.

    1. Which is it? Knowing when to use its or it's may seem tricky at first, but determining when to use the correct version is actually pretty simple: just remember that it's--with an apostrophe--is a contraction of it is .

    It's a good thing we backed up the computer last night.

    Have you send the Anderson file? It's missing.

    Its, on the other hand, is the possessive form of it. Never use an apostrophe in this situation.

    That dog has mud all over its paws.

    The tree is about to loose its leaves.

    Let's take a look at both forms used in the same sentence:

    I can it's my cell phone by its ringtone.

    When in doubt, mentally substitute it is for its/it's and read the sentence again. If the meaning is clear, you've made the right choice.

    2. Comma dilemmas Commas are often thrown (unwillingly) into places where they don't belong. Use commas to help your readers understand meaning and to prevent ambiguity.

    Ambiguous: To be successful students must study to pass exams.

    This sentence runs together somewhat. At first glance, the adjective successful appears to modify the noun students. In this case, however, successful isn't meant to function as an adjective. Insert a comma to help clarify:

    Better: To be successful, students must study to pass exams.

    Excess commas result in sentences that are difficult to read. Try to avoid overusing commas in your copy.

    Unnecessary commas: As I approached the bus, this morning, I tripped, and spilled coffee on my new jacket.

    Better: As I approached the bus this morning, I tripped and spilled coffee on my new jacket.

    3. Who's S is it, anyway? When it comes to adding the letter s to make a noun possessive, it's common to see errors like this:

    Remember to bring two #2 pencil's for the certification test tomorrow.

    Adding an apostrophe and an s makes a singular noun possessive. In this example, pencils should simply be plural, not possessive. After all, the pencil doesn't own anything. Eliminate the apostrophe and the sentence will be fine:

    Remember to bring two #2 pencils for the certification test tomorrow.

    When changing a singular noun to its plural form, simply add an s, -es, or -ies accordingly.

    Examples:

    report (singular), reports (plural)

    business (singular), businesses (plural)

    company (singular), companies (plural)

    Got it now? In your next piece of writing, get ready, get set, and punctuate properly!

    Resources
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    Feedback Central
    If you've got suggestions or comments about how to make this Ezine even better, I'd love to hear from you. Are the articles useful? Have any of these tips helped with your own writing? Send me an email and let me know how I'm doing!

    About Cassie Hart
    Over six years of professional writing experience have allowed me to learn the finer points of writing efficient, effective, and creative copy. Press releases, brochures, newsletters, website content, press kits, and articles are among the many types of marketing and promotional communications I regularly generate for clients.

    To discuss potential projects not listed here (or to obtain more information about any of those mentioned above) feel free to send me an email. Contact me today for a fr*e estimate on your next writing project!

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